Prologue of My Book available at Critique Circle

As the title says, it’s currently up for review in their story queue. You can find it by going here, or by signing up for an account at and searching in the beginner story queue. If you like it and want to make your own critique (it is why I posted it after all) feel free to do that here, or on their website.


Website about the stuff I write

living a mindful life

The Byronic Man

We can rebuild him. We have the technology... Drier. Hilariouser. More satirical than before.

Lisa Scullard

- Just another indie author letting things get out of hand :)

Live to Write - Write to Live

We live to write and write to live ... professional writers talk about the craft and business of writing